Island Fresh Poetry

Created on the most isolated island chain in the world and made with pure Hawaiian Soul. Copyright 2006 by Kahokule'a Haiku. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, February 22, 2006

The Inflatable

Hawai'i watered down.
Aimless winds slither around.
Sneaking past dormant volcanoes.
Convulsing tourist inflatables.
Greedy enthusiasm advances always.
Adrift, stampedes spend ravenously away.
Shiny new age castaways.




This poem with a hidden message is my most complicated to date. If you don't want to see the hint stop reading this............Okay here's The Hint: The formula is 1-2-3, 1-2-3, 1-2-3, etc. Still don't get it. First word first letter, second word second letter, third word third letter, and repeat the process with the next word starting with the first letter.

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